honorat: (Will and Elizabeth by Honorat)
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by Honorat
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I need to find myself a writing job that pays, mate!

Summary: Set after the movie. Elizabeth finds her old society is not so eager to welcome her home. For the "Drift" challenge at Black Pearl Sails.

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They want to despise her, she knows. That or pity. She’s heard the whispers behind fans, counted the decrease in calling cards and rich ivory invitations. What is it that she is supposed to be now? A shameless hussy, wild to a fault, such damaged goods that no man of consequence will have her?

But still they come to the governor’s ball, gawking and gossiping. She tosses her golden-brown head in triumph as she sees the reluctant jealousy in her former friends’ eyes. The music drifts over their heads as Will leads her into the next dance. There is not another young man in the room as beautiful as her blacksmith. He needs no sawdust stuffing to simulate shoulders.

The glittering ballroom, the censorious stares fade as Will guides their steps. No musicians of her father’s hiring can match the powerful symphony Will plays on the orchestra of her flesh with his lightest touch.

She should have known that a man so elegant and graceful in the intimate dance of swords would find his feet on native heath in the measured steps of the waltz.

Date: 2005-09-12 12:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] corrielle.livejournal.com
I like the imagery of this quite a bit. Especially the line No musicians of her father’s hiring can match the powerful symphony Will plays on the orchestra of her flesh with his lightest touch. That gave me shivers.

Figures Will would be a good dancer too... :-)

Date: 2005-09-12 01:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honorat.livejournal.com
I'm glad the imagery gave you shivers. That was what I was trying to do. I wanted the thrill of the two of them to quite overwhelm the chill of the company. I don't imagine Will grew up being taught to dance, but someone (I wish I could remember who) wrote about him practicing so he could dance with Elizabeth. I think he would be a quick study at it. Hence this piece. Thannks for commenting.

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