honorat: (Will Turner by Honorat)
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by Honorat
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Owned by the Mouse. I swear I am an almost innocent fanfic writer.
Pairing: Will/Elizabeth
Summary: I have finally managed to write a drabble again! Well, a double one. A little missing scene for the Black Pearl Sails "Lullaby" challenge. Angsty, if you can believe it.


Every night after his rescue he had fought sleep with a desperate fury, but eventually his exhausted young body would vanquish his battered spirit and drag him down into fiery nightmares. Then he would come violently awake, his throat a raw echo of screams, the thin sheet twisted damp, the acrid scent of his own fear stinging his nostrils, unable to flee from the images branded on the backs of his eyelids. He would not return to sleep.

This night, however, he found himself rocking in his mother’s arms again, hearing the soothing melody of the old lullaby she used to sing over him. The gentle notes held power over the terror, driving it from him, surrounding him with safety. A cool hand brushed the damp strands of hair from his forehead as his mother used to do, but it was not the familiar, work-worn palm.

He opened his eyes, startled, to see the face of the young girl with the freckles and ringlets and large, dark eyes. Again he heard her soft voice: “I’m watching over you, Will.” Her hand slipped into his.

That night Will Turner finally slept until dawn.

Date: 2006-02-03 01:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honorat.livejournal.com
Sweet angst--get your oxymoronic paradox right here! I'm glad you liked the description. I wrote it, took one look at it, said what a heap of cliches and did my best to make things more vivid. I've been out of the drabble business for too long. Thank you for commenting.

Date: 2006-02-03 02:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aft-and-daft.livejournal.com
LOL! :-) Well, it was certainly vivid and not cliche. :-) I was just writing something the other day and quite annoyed at how cliche it was sounding...that happens...I still don't know if I managed to make it more original or not. :-P

Hey, at least you can write a drabble - I have yet to manage that. (I'm too darn long-winded I guess...) ;-)

Date: 2006-02-03 05:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honorat.livejournal.com
Every once in awhile I manage to come near the drabble limit. But the last drabble I started, "Crossing," is already over 16,000 words posted and I have pages more of it unposted--I do know about long-winded!

If they're good words, more power to them, I say.

Date: 2006-02-03 05:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aft-and-daft.livejournal.com
Oooh, goody, more "Crossing"!!! I was just catching up on that tonight, and I can't wait for the rest!! :-)

..not that there's anything wrong with being long-winded - as long as one is not boring in the process (which you aren't) :-)

Date: 2006-02-03 06:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honorat.livejournal.com
Well, it's a good thing you can put up with my long-windedness, because that story has run away so far God himself couldn't find it with a radio telescope. I have no idea where it's going, but it's going to take awhile getting there.

Date: 2006-02-03 09:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aft-and-daft.livejournal.com
LOL!! :-) Writing is an adventure, isn't it? I never realized until I started writing myself...it's addicting, too... :-) Well, I'm certianly looking forward to more of "Crossing" :-) (though I do hope to see a little more Norrington and Gilette in there, but only because I'm an obsessed!fangirl.) ;-)

Date: 2006-02-03 09:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] honorat.livejournal.com
Oh, never fear. The Navy gets several episodes almost to themselves.

Date: 2006-02-03 11:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aft-and-daft.livejournal.com
Wooooooohoooooooo!!!!!! :-D

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