She would protect him with her broken wings. Gaaaahh. (You've upped your stock holdings in Kleenex again, haven't you? You must have, for you're hitting hard in the very first paragraph. *sniffle*)
although it looked like a perfectly ordinary, boring strip of planking. Well, it was a piece of his Pearl and therefore infinitely lovely, but still. "Infinitely lovely" hee! Such wonderful Jackness in the midst of all the awfulness.
yardgoods-intensive contraptions Oh, my. What a delightful, inventive description of a skirt.
There was something disturbing about him, she decided woozily. "There's two of you," she muttered. "No wait, there's three, no two. Jack Sparrow, one of you is enough for this world. This is just wrong." Marvelous. The entire exchange about multiple Jacks is delightful, and the inventory of the chest (mermaid!!) is a wonderful touch.
an adorable little mucky-nosed ragamuffin Sort of like the one on his shoulders in another story? *g*
"Of course I can stand," Anamaria said defensively. Uh oh. Have known people to say that and then pass out trying. *covers eyes with hands but continues reading through fingers*
"I know. I know, love," Jack said apologetically. "It's just me. You know I'm perfectly harmless." "The only time you were ever harmless," Anamaria grumbled, "was before you were conceived. *snort!*
All the required little steps to get to relief for Ana, and each and every twinge, both for her and for Jack - incredible scene, and so very realistic. Poor Anamaria, hating the fact that she cannot do for herself, and surely hating that this is one time she cannot overlook her gender! And hooray for Tearlach! (and as usual, you have exactly the right feel for an injury - having had one leg in a cast that went far too high, can say with certainly that you've captured just the right unwieldiness)
He could sense unborn slaps seething about inside of her. Hee! A different type of wee beastie. *wonders what an unborn slap looks like*
"Feelin' better, eh?" he squeezed her shoulder. "No trouble at all..." Dear Jack. Knows just when to apply a kind lie.
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Gaaaahh. (You've upped your stock holdings in Kleenex again, haven't you? You must have, for you're hitting hard in the very first paragraph. *sniffle*)
although it looked like a perfectly ordinary, boring strip of planking. Well, it was a piece of his Pearl and therefore infinitely lovely, but still.
"Infinitely lovely" hee! Such wonderful Jackness in the midst of all the awfulness.
yardgoods-intensive contraptions
Oh, my. What a delightful, inventive description of a skirt.
There was something disturbing about him, she decided woozily. "There's two of you," she muttered. "No wait, there's three, no two. Jack Sparrow, one of you is enough for this world. This is just wrong."
Marvelous. The entire exchange about multiple Jacks is delightful, and the inventory of the chest (mermaid!!) is a wonderful touch.
an adorable little mucky-nosed ragamuffin
Sort of like the one on his shoulders in another story? *g*
"Of course I can stand," Anamaria said defensively.
Uh oh. Have known people to say that and then pass out trying. *covers eyes with hands but continues reading through fingers*
"I know. I know, love," Jack said apologetically. "It's just me. You know I'm perfectly harmless."
"The only time you were ever harmless," Anamaria grumbled, "was before you were conceived.
*snort!*
All the required little steps to get to relief for Ana, and each and every twinge, both for her and for Jack - incredible scene, and so very realistic. Poor Anamaria, hating the fact that she cannot do for herself, and surely hating that this is one time she cannot overlook her gender! And hooray for Tearlach! (and as usual, you have exactly the right feel for an injury - having had one leg in a cast that went far too high, can say with certainly that you've captured just the right unwieldiness)
He could sense unborn slaps seething about inside of her.
Hee! A different type of wee beastie. *wonders what an unborn slap looks like*
"Feelin' better, eh?" he squeezed her shoulder. "No trouble at all..."
Dear Jack. Knows just when to apply a kind lie.