I've always been the sort of peron who tries to avoid leaving comments because I can never articulate accurately how I feel about a piece to the author and I'd hate to leave a simple 'I like it' for a piece that merits so much more. I figure I should at least make a vailant attempt to comment on this story.
I have to tell you I've been in a lot of fandoms since the age of 14 and I've read some good fanfics as well as some not so good fanfics. I've simply got to tell you that this is one of the best POTC fanfic I have yet to come across for reason that I shall try and explain outside my own skull.
I love the way you describe everything in this story. Your amazingly eloquent and you carry your extensive vocabulary well and I've admittedly learned a few new words in the course of devouring this story thus far. Sometimes I find stories sometimes get bogged down under the wight of over descriptiveness but i've never once experince that hear. Your story is addictive and easily readable while at the same time having something beautifully poetic about the way your string words together. So Bravo for that!
I also love the treasure trove of sailing knowledge you've been able to breath into this story it adds a gritty realism that is extremely unique in this fandom and I give you endless kudos for all the research that must have gone into tracking down all that mostless forgotten knowledge.
i adore what you've done with some of my chracters here. You've sucessfully molded OCs and canon charcetr together without making it seem awkward your chracters fit into the world liek they should. I also love how you've seem to burrow yourself into the heads of these characters and as such have been able to flesh out a lot more aspects to these character that fit in with how cannon shows them to be. For this you've captured my endless love! Whether you want it or not!!!
You've easily have me as a fan and in the past days I've devoured the parts of the story you have up and I'm eagerly on my knees waiting for more. I have to tell you you've had me cry a few times during the course of this story and i'm already eagerly awaiting any scraps your muse deems necessary to toss us poor souls.
Phew! I've gotten though the comment. Enjoy and be proud I don't think I've EVER had so much to say about any fic I've read before. rest assured I will be recommending this piece to all my POTC minded friends.
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I have to tell you I've been in a lot of fandoms since the age of 14 and I've read some good fanfics as well as some not so good fanfics. I've simply got to tell you that this is one of the best POTC fanfic I have yet to come across for reason that I shall try and explain outside my own skull.
I love the way you describe everything in this story. Your amazingly eloquent and you carry your extensive vocabulary well and I've admittedly learned a few new words in the course of devouring this story thus far. Sometimes I find stories sometimes get bogged down under the wight of over descriptiveness but i've never once experince that hear. Your story is addictive and easily readable while at the same time having something beautifully poetic about the way your string words together. So Bravo for that!
I also love the treasure trove of sailing knowledge you've been able to breath into this story it adds a gritty realism that is extremely unique in this fandom and I give you endless kudos for all the research that must have gone into tracking down all that mostless forgotten knowledge.
i adore what you've done with some of my chracters here. You've sucessfully molded OCs and canon charcetr together without making it seem awkward your chracters fit into the world liek they should. I also love how you've seem to burrow yourself into the heads of these characters and as such have been able to flesh out a lot more aspects to these character that fit in with how cannon shows them to be. For this you've captured my endless love! Whether you want it or not!!!
You've easily have me as a fan and in the past days I've devoured the parts of the story you have up and I'm eagerly on my knees waiting for more. I have to tell you you've had me cry a few times during the course of this story and i'm already eagerly awaiting any scraps your muse deems necessary to toss us poor souls.
Phew! I've gotten though the comment. Enjoy and be proud I don't think I've EVER had so much to say about any fic I've read before. rest assured I will be recommending this piece to all my POTC minded friends.