He could sense the unborn slaps seething inside her. LOL!!! Oh this was sooooo funny! And that silly dress did, for once come in useful - who would guess? LOL! Nice touch of reality with humor. Jack and Ana have a tense, and dicey relationship, that you've showcased nicely here. Poor Ana to be in such straights, and having to ask Jack of all people to giver her a hand, and more despite his ribs. I saved this one too - have all the chapters - can't wait for more! :)
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Date: 2006-08-11 02:31 pm (UTC)