He could sense unborn slaps seething about inside of her.
Great line, and I can see Jack thinking that!
This is such a well-developed story - the characters, the action, and the setting. And I could just picture Jack pulling the Fiji mermaid out of that trunk! :D
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Date: 2006-08-10 04:47 am (UTC)Great line, and I can see Jack thinking that!
This is such a well-developed story - the characters, the action, and the setting. And I could just picture Jack pulling the Fiji mermaid out of that trunk! :D